My Photography: Jakarta National Monument Panorama

My Photography: Jakarta National Monument Panorama

If you read my previous blog post, you know that previously I when to Capital Jakarta and shot cityscape and architecture photography. I said, that I shot a lot but haven’t processed all of them yet. Now, I still haven’t. But I did just finish one photograph. This photography probably my hardest photography yet. This is my photography: Jakarta national monument panorama.

This time I wanna show you how I took this photograph and how created it. One step at the time. Specific to this one photography.

Pre-Processing

For this photograph, I took with my camera, Sony A58 with Tamron AF 18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 XR Di II LD Aspherical [IF] MACRO. Sirui T-2204X tripod and remote shutter. All in my Kata DL-B-210 BUMBLE BEE backpack.

My photograph was taken in the capital city of Jakarta. Right in the middle of the city in heart and symbol of this national, national monument or simply refer as “Monas.” In the middle of the day. Actually, I want to go there in morning but I can’t. The good thing is I was planning to shot black and white long exposure photography. So it wasn’t much of a problem.

That’s the plan. Okay…confession?

I don’t really have much of a plan back then. I just packed all my camera gear into my bag, got on a bus, and then went to a mall and bought an earphone. After that, I went to Monas. I even got lost for a bit. But still…I was there with my camera.

Basically, I don’t really do much in pre-processing.

Processing

This is how I shot it.

First I scouted the area. The problem is the place is huge and I have to walk about 2 km, I think, in the middle of the day. The good thing was it’s cloudy and the place always windy. So it kinda helps a little.

After I found a good spot, I set up my gear. A tripod, attach the camera, and my camera bag to the tripod as a weight leverage, since it was windy.

First I did some trial. Took some shot, adjusted my focus, set up the camera setting, and then I shot the panorama.

My idea was a cityscape photography with Monas as the main subject and some building aligning on the horizon as the background.

The planed was to used my NiSi Nano IR ND32000 filter and create long exposure effect (the huge one). But I decided not to do it for some reason. First is for technical reason. I wanted to shot a panorama. In my experience long exposure and panorama doesn’t work well. The problem is that when you put it to software and stitch all the photos into panorama, sometime it doesn’t work, a simple error. Of course not all the time. Even if you manage to stitch it together, the problem is in the detail, which will be mismatch. Second is for personal reason. At the time, I felt like the cloud look amazing. I felt it would be a shame if I just motion it out of that dramatic looking sky. So in the end I didn’t use the ND filter.

This is how I took the panorama photography:

Attach my camera to the tripod. Put the camera in vertical and shot 180 degrees all side from left to right with Monas in the middle. Each shot has the same 2/3 frame of the previous shot. These are all the photograph that I took:

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For that shot, it took almost 30 minutes. In the middle of the day, in the middle of a huge field. Frankly speaking, it’s not easy and for a moment I was thinking, “what the hell I’m doing here?”

Post-Processing

It not only hard in processing step but also in the post-processing step, especially for my laptop.

I used Adobe Photoshop Lightroom CC, Adobe Photoshop CC, and Google Nik Silver Efex Pro 2 for this photography. I also use Wacom Intuos Pro Small pen tablet.

Before I transform it to black and white cityscape, first I must combine all of the photos into one panorama photo. First I stitch all the photos that I took into one panorama photo. Usually, I use Photoshop for this. But not anymore, since Lightroom CC now can create panorama itself.

Select all the photos and right click->photo merge->panorama

Give it a few minute and you can see the preview of the panorama and click OK. And here how it looks like:

Done…just kidding. Not even close.

In my experience in stitching photos into a panorama. I never got the perfect one and I’m sure a lot of people experience it, even if they don’t realize it. What I mean is the problem of a panorama isn’t visible at first glance but in the detail.

Take a look at my panorama. Look nice huh. But then I zoom in and then I can see some part of the image doesn’t align well.

See the red circle
When zooming in

There’s a way to fix it. I can just patch it up. All I did import the panorama photo into Photoshop and also import the original photo to match with the crooked part of the panorama. And just combine it using brush tool to make it match and fix it. If I can’t, I used the clone tool to paint the problem part.

fixed

Now this photo ready. Save and close. Back to Lightroom and start with the basic adjustment. Transform to black and white. Just decrease the highlight, increase the shadow, and match the white and black. Then edited it back to Photoshop.

Before I began to edit it in Photoshop, I created a plan on what I’m gonna do with the panorama. And here’s the idea:

Don’t understand? You don’t have to. Basically, there are three parts in my composition. The ground as my foreground; Monas buildings as the Subject; and the sky as the background.

First I select all of my subjects using the pen tool. Just select the Monas and all the building. So later they have their own adjustment.

Monas and Buildings selection

Then I began editing the background. I used Silver Efex Pro 2. What I want was a smooth looking sky. But at the same time, I want to keep the cloud form detail since it looks great.

Then I used Silver Efex Pro 2 again for the foreground. For this, I want to make it more visible. So I just reduce the exposure and increase the contrast. And reduce some detail. But not as much as the background.

Now the background and foreground are finished, next is the subjects. Using Silver Efex Pro 2, I edited the subjects, mean the buildings and Monas. Since I already select all of them, I can edit them specifically. And here what I did:

Look pretty good!!! But not yet. I still want more. My final editing goes back to Lightroom.

Just burn & dodge in Lightroom. I used the radial filter for this and mostly on buildings and gradual filter to decrease the sky and ground exposure. And then brighten some part of the sky and ground with the radial tool. Here where I put it:

The gray dots are radial filter

Then I add a little adjustment and sharpening and the finish it up.

Jakarta panorama cityscape with national monument or Monas

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If you think it complicates. Because it is.

When I said it hard for my laptop, it’s because how heavy the photo data is. Imagine this, one RAW photo sometime heavy for a normal computer to process. Causing lag and loading. Now, what happens when you combine 12 RAW photos into one? My laptop not exactly for photo editing. Which is one of the reasons it took me so long to finish.

I think I broke my laptop. I hope not. Well anyway, that’s how I create Jakarta Panorama in black and white fine art.


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2 thoughts on “My Photography: Jakarta National Monument Panorama

  1. Thank you for visiting my blog and ‘liking’ my photography. Seeing your superior but very complex picture compositions makes me see how far I have to go to get results like yours. With differing exposures for different zones and dodging and burning you’ve got the fine control of obsolete and expensive but beautiful chemical photography. That’s why your contrast is so smooth and creamy; and you can ‘burn out’ anything distracting in the background of your subject; or clone it from the original RAW image (hope your computer ain’t broken!); or use super long exposures of your non-moving subjects to eliminate pesky pedestrians and vehicles and animals that move. You’ve got control over your pictures combined with a ‘good eye’ for composition and modern (though sadly Windows-based) post production image manipulation.

    And you are an artist. Your web presentation is excellent with proper mobile/desk screen ratios, nice fonts and everything seems to work. I like your unusual decision to have your ‘index’ page be a gallery with a separate ‘blog’ page, it centers your pictures, the ‘stars’ of your blog. And stitch-together panoramas seem especially labor intensive- combined with your time and travel, you are sacrificing for your art. I can see why Internet picture thieves would target your pics. I’ve not read all your very helpful posts but I intend to. Your are giving away the candy store but thanks from me. I have subscribed to agrandaizph.com and look forward to more beautiful pictures from your hard labor.

    PS-You don’t really need ‘helpful criticism’ but…try to use more definite articles like ‘the car’ and ‘a building’ when speaking or writing English; watch subject/object agreement ‘one train’…’two trains’; maybe have someone proof-read your text. I’m a pedantic ex-English major, your written English is of course 100% comprehensible, detailed and understandable. And your blog appears professional.
    PPS-With your talent and hard work you could stretch far beyond architectural renderings, as good as yours are. Thanks again for the fine pictures and cogent explanations on how you made them.

    1. Thank you for your compliment!

      It’s a really great comment. Actually I think this is the most thorough comment, ever. That’s a compliment btw.

      Also your description about my photo help me a lot. Like the one you said that I can burn out distracting element. Actually I never thought of that and realizing that give me many new idea for my next photo.

      I do must say that I use windows base laptop because there’s a lot of thing that I want to do, which can’t be done in apple macbook. Like playing video game…actually that’s it.

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